06/19/2020
Ahmad Syaqiel Mohd Ashri (0338345)
Design Research DissertationFinal Project
Instructions
Final Project
This was the journal article required to write after completing our final dissertation. This is below.
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Week 11: Put edited and adapted then the reference for the cover on the imprint. Make sure to paraphrase.
Week 12: More on background for introduction. Explain the general public. How many people? Why I chose my interviewees. May give names. Summarise for discussion.
Week 13: Make sure to include the data points within my findings and discussions. I was also recommended to shorten my sentences. Also make sure environmental is spelt correctly. Add limitations to the conclusions section.
Week 14: Work on overall discussion for each part in discussions section and work on intro a bit more.
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